Tuesday, June 9, 2009

The full E-Mail and response from Myself, Josh and Debbie

To: Josh (callofduty7@live.co.uk)

Thats fine, thanks josh.. N yeh marketing team wanted something on the other side because it looked bare on the back.

But thanks, ur a star, n ill let debbie know..

Sunia

From: callofduty7@live.co.uk
To: sunia_18@hotmail.co.uk
Subject: RE: poster feedback
Date: Tue, 9 Jun 2009 13:04:04

Hi Sunia,

I have now been told that Debbie wants the leaflet to be double sided, I shall work on the changes as soon as the content for both sides of the leaflet is sent to me, please send it ASAP so I can start work on it. Also yes I did misunderstand the point you were trying to make, how very unfortunate indeed. Hopefully you (and the rest of the class and the tutor) will like the finished leaflet.

Thanks

Joshua


From: sunia_18@hotmail.co.uk
To: callofduty7@live.co.uk
Subject: RE: poster feedback
Date: Tue, 9 Jun 2009 12:35:03

Hey josh i think u misunderstud of what debbie asked you to do.. Basically you've done the op..
We wnted the text to be bigger, (as in writing in the box'z) the way it is on poster 3 but the title should be the same as it was before, just plain white..
Try tu sort that out or else the whole class gonna say something as they have already said something naw.. Taaa

Sunia


From: callofduty7@live.co.uk

Hi Team and Debbie,
I have made the changes that you asked for, here is the finished leaflet I hope it meets all your requirements.

Thanks to you all
Josh

> Date: Mon, 8 Jun 2009 09:55:05 +0100
> From: dmorrisroe@shipley.ac.uk

> Hi Josh
> The team have looked at your posters and decided that leaflet 2 is their
> preferred choice.
>
> However - can you please make the following changes - take the
> hyphenation off - so it doesn'r read cours - es. advertising etc. All
> words need to be complete on one line or return them to next line. The
> team prefer the text on leaflet 3 as it is much clearer to read and
> slightly larger - can you make the text appear like this on leaflet 2
> please.
>
> Please reply all to this when you send the final version so all members
> of the team can put it in their blogs.
>
> You also need to email me the evaluation questions that I sent on
> Friday please.
>
> Thanks
> Debbie

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